Revision Lab - Verbs

Thursday,
November 13, 2008

7:11 PM

Need strong concise
verbs to make a strong point

By showing
multiple sides of character a parallel can be made about the hidden (real verb)
role of multiple truths.  The idea of multiple truths seems to show that there
are many answers, and that there may be hidden truths say what?.
In the presence of contradiction readers must be aware of clarifications to come.  I feel that the ambiguity
of the Green Knight relays
the message that things are not how they seem and to be, and to be prepared for the unwinding answers. The idea
of a lack of consistency in events and behaviors seems to mirror the importance
that we as humans seek consistency and instant understanding.  The
ambiguity in this piece seems
to relay the message that we must be patient, for sometimes understanding must
come from time, and not all answers are easy to find.

Confusing I think

Every verb is a
variation of “to be” or “to seem” or “show”

Real verb is hiding
inside

Lack of precision –
manages to say nothing in a lot of words

Newspapers use good
verbs due to limited space

Subject -> verb

No passive voice

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Revision Lab - Verbs

Thursday,
November 13, 2008

7:11 PM

Need strong concise
verbs to make a strong point

By showing
multiple sides of character a parallel can be made about the hidden (real verb)
role of multiple truths.  The idea of multiple truths seems to show that there
are many answers, and that there may be hidden truths say what?.
In the presence of contradiction readers must be aware of clarifications to come.  I feel that the ambiguity
of the Green Knight relays
the message that things are not how they seem and to be, and to be prepared for the unwinding answers. The idea
of a lack of consistency in events and behaviors seems to mirror the importance
that we as humans seek consistency and instant understanding.  The
ambiguity in this piece seems
to relay the message that we must be patient, for sometimes understanding must
come from time, and not all answers are easy to find.

Confusing I think

Every verb is a
variation of “to be” or “to seem” or “show”

Real verb is hiding
inside

Lack of precision –
manages to say nothing in a lot of words

Newspapers use good
verbs due to limited space

Subject -> verb

No passive voice

Pasted
from <file:///G:\English\Dante\10-Revision%20Lab%20-%20Verbs.doc>