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Monday,
November 17, 2008

9:32 AM

Paolo and Francesca
represent an overwhelming false beauty, in that their love is so
all-encompassing that they lose all other aspects of being which makes human
life remarkable.

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Paolo and
Francesca's life is so controlled by their unrelenting passion for each other
that they miss out on the other remarkable aspects of human life.

Aspects of being

Gerund
of to be

Abstraction
of abstrictions

Aspects
of existence

Well
what are they?

Do
they matter

Do the 2 parts of a
sentence fit together????

No
- split it and develop each one

What does
"overwhelming false beauty" mean

"All
encompassing" redundant?

"In
that"  - what does that mean???

It
just sounds good

Double
"that"

Subject verb
agreement issue

Difference between
which and that

Restrictive
and non restrictive clauses

Non
restrictive: clause not needed for sentence to make sense (extra info) - which

Different
than an appositive

Appositive:
My uncle, a doctor, is an idiot

Non
restrictive: My uncle, who is a
doctor, is an idiot

Restrictive:
Needed for sentence : that

(….With
exceptions)

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Revision Lab

Monday,
November 17, 2008

9:32 AM

Paolo and Francesca
represent an overwhelming false beauty, in that their love is so
all-encompassing that they lose all other aspects of being which makes human
life remarkable.

Pasted
from <http://mrmullen.pbwiki.com/Revision-Lab>

Paolo and
Francesca's life is so controlled by their unrelenting passion for each other
that they miss out on the other remarkable aspects of human life.

Aspects of being

Gerund
of to be

Abstraction
of abstrictions

Aspects
of existence

Well
what are they?

Do
they matter

Do the 2 parts of a
sentence fit together????

No
- split it and develop each one

What does
"overwhelming false beauty" mean

"All
encompassing" redundant?

"In
that"  - what does that mean???

It
just sounds good

Double
"that"

Subject verb
agreement issue

Difference between
which and that

Restrictive
and non restrictive clauses

Non
restrictive: clause not needed for sentence to make sense (extra info) - which

Different
than an appositive

Appositive:
My uncle, a doctor, is an idiot

Non
restrictive: My uncle, who is a
doctor, is an idiot

Restrictive:
Needed for sentence : that

(….With
exceptions)