Revision Lab
Mon= day, November 17, 2008
9:3= 2 AM
Paolo and Fran= cesca represent an overwhelming false beauty, in that their love is so all-encompassing that they lose all other aspects of being which makes human life remarkable.
Pa= sted from <http://mrmulle= n.pbwiki.com/Revision-Lab>
Paolo and Francesca's life is so controlled by their unrelenting passion for each oth= er that they miss out on the other remarkable aspects of human life.
Aspects of bei= ng
Gerund of to be
Abstraction of abstrictions
Aspects of existence
Well what are they?
Do they matter
Do the 2 parts= of a sentence fit together????
No - split it and develop each one
What does "overwhelming false beauty" mean
"All encompassing" redundant?
"In that" - what does that mean?= ??
It just sounds good
Double "that"
Subject verb agreement issue
Difference bet= ween which and that
Restrictive and non restrictive clauses
Non restrictive: clause not needed for sentence to make sense (extra info) - wh= ich
Different than an appositive
Appositive: My uncle, a doctor, is an idiot
Non restrictive: My uncle, who= is a doctor, is an idiot
Restrictive: Needed for sentence : that
(….With exceptions)
Revision Lab
Mon= day, November 17, 2008
9:3= 2 AM
Paolo and Fran= cesca represent an overwhelming false beauty, in that their love is so all-encompassing that they lose all other aspects of being which makes human life remarkable.
Pa= sted from <http://mrmulle= n.pbwiki.com/Revision-Lab>
Paolo and Francesca's life is so controlled by their unrelenting passion for each oth= er that they miss out on the other remarkable aspects of human life.
Aspects of bei= ng
Gerund of to be
Abstraction of abstrictions
Aspects of existence
Well what are they?
Do they matter
Do the 2 parts= of a sentence fit together????
No - split it and develop each one
What does "overwhelming false beauty" mean
"All encompassing" redundant?
"In that" - what does that mean?= ??
It just sounds good
Double "that"
Subject verb agreement issue
Difference bet= ween which and that
Restrictive and non restrictive clauses
Non restrictive: clause not needed for sentence to make sense (extra info) - wh= ich
Different than an appositive
Appositive: My uncle, a doctor, is an idiot
Non restrictive: My uncle, who= is a doctor, is an idiot
Restrictive: Needed for sentence : that
(….With exceptions)